The clouds go gray, the Earth seems to shake
All stands stock still, as a glass like lake
Skies over this world, shatter into broken shards
It's raining glass. It's raining glass
Your blood red tears, rip me at the seams
I brush them away, still nothing's as it was
Before we conquered love, it's all a game
Your head I hold, fold back your hair
This kiss will heal, what time has torn apart
I'll hold you now, rivers won't take us under
Holding hands and walking together through the rain
We'll guarantee a rainbow at the end
Good poem, but I feel this would work better if you spent a little time on it to change it into a Sonnet, it's almost there as it is!
ReplyDeleteI agree. I would only need 2 more lines. Perhaps my next day off, I shall give it a look-see again.
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