I'd like to know whether to expand on this or to keep it short like it is. I'm stuck somewhere in the middle. Enjoy and let me know. _Katie_
~+Goodnight+~
My lips tenderly graze your skin
Wishing for more, or even just a kiss
However you don't seem to notice
Not a little bit, not even at all
And this makes me ponder
What I want after all
Well it's a good succint piece as it stands, leaves the reader pondering.
ReplyDeleteWould be interesting to see what else is going on.